Ch2 19
Ah, Val. How I missed your monologuing ways. Alli added in some details that weren’t there in the original. Mainly because it was black and white, but here we are. A bit more action while keeping the humour of the original.
I think it’s well done.
Love it! The improvements improve!
I love the bubbles and indications of power this time around
We learned a lot in the first version. We’re hoping to bring more to the forefront so that the audience will be drawn into the world far faster.
Also, I’m thinking of uploading all the old pages to a google drive to show people the before/after pages. It would be great for examples like this.
Chica, put on a bathing suit.
Hrm. Perhaps an incentive pic based around this idea…
Looks like Jill is…out of the element.